Huzaifa, that was an awesome blog post. You have a great syntax in your writing, your sentence structure is polished and you use complex/descriptive language. You did a great job at identifying Whitmans affinity towards Lincoln as he too was a man of the people, one that championed the cause of slaves. I also like how you made a connection between Lincoln being a captain of a boat, captaining the ship of 19th century America through the turbulent times of war and slavery. Great stuff, keep it up 😀
My peer review of Huzaifa Shakirs blog. Huzaifa has an eloquent and structured style of writing and answered the question really well. Great blog post!
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